I think, therefore I write

Chocolate

It was right there in front of her eyes, dark brown and silky. It never once failed to cheer her up. She visualized the experience of that warm delicious feeling. She was tempted to reach out, to touch and to let go of all the inhibitions. Her mind reminded her of her resolution to diet.

Until later,
Keirthana 🙂

P.S: My first and poor attempt at a Fiction 55. Please bear with it 🙂

10 Comments

  1. Red Handed

    hehehe my story almost everyday

  2. Ajay Kontham™

    Haha.
    I am eating one right now. #NoKidding #TotalCoincidence #CadburySilk
    (Ok! That’s a lot of hashtags. Old Habit. Sry!)

    First attempt? Doesn’t seem like one. Or you must be very good at this.
    Nicely penned. 🙂

    And thanks for dropping by on my blog. I mean thank you so much. 🙂
    Btw I have been to your blog just a while back, but I didn’t find the followers gadget, so keeps tabs on your post-updates was difficult. Sry about that.

    And You got an amazing blog. 🙂

    Keep writing. 🙂
    Take Care.

    -Ajay Kontham

    • Keirthana

      Coincidence huh? And here I was thinking that only girls are crazy about Cadbuery Silk 😛 That chocolate is one of the reasons why I became fat!!! Hmph! Anyway, Thanks for your kind words 🙂

      And thanks for the following, means a lot 🙂

  3. Ajay Kontham™

    It’s just a misconception that only girls eat Silk. 😛
    Look at me. I eat it like a crazy dude.

    Hmm, You are welcome . 😀

  4. Raghavan alias Saravanan M

    Ha ha ha. My bad, I had to read it twice to get the crux! 🙂 What is the 55 btw?

    A nice post anyways. Keep it up!

    Cheers,
    Raghavan alias Saravanan M
    Jeddah | Kingdom of Saudi Arabia

    • Keirthana

      Anna, it is like a narration or story that has to be written in a maximum of 55 words. But the thrill is making it to be exactly 55 words 🙂 That way you can give some work to your mind to pack up your thoughts in the best way possible in exactly 55 words (Title not inclusive)

      Try one sometime when you are free 🙂

      • Raghavan alias Saravanan M

        oh.. that is great. Thanks Keirthana. Let me give it a try when time permits. It sounds interesting! 🙂

  5. Kiara

    I loved it! I think it well captures something many people experience!

    • Keirthana

      Thanks Kiara 🙂 True indeed!

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